warn waves crashing over the beach
looking out over the morning ocean
the sand in my toes as I eat a peach
the sound of cars and other commotion
vendors selling their own special products
that really came from the gift shop in town
large wooden sculptures and porcelain ducks
and when you say no they can only frown
paddling was fun the water was clear
the fish were swimming and jumping as well
for just a second the fish would appear
enough for a picture that looks just swell
paddling alongside that rocky shore
fishing for hours searching for one more
Your use of imagery made me miss the ocean
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